NEW SONG - OKAY! (PlayWryte)

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    NEW SONG - OKAY! (PlayWryte)

    Its been a while since I've been on here, would appreciate feedback!

    https://soundcloud.com/playwryte/okay

    OKAY (Lyrics)

    Hook x2
    Okay
    You know me,
    But that dont mean that we homies
    Okay
    You sorry,
    But where the fuck was you always
    Okay
    Its on,
    But I知 too far gone
    No way,
    Just faded
    In all the best ways, ya

    Verse
    Okay, now its time to be real
    As I知 winding the reel, keep ya eye on the film
    Lets take it back, to the night of the deal
    Its more than a moment, whole life that I feel
    I feel like you hated me, feeling enabled me
    It gave me a greater need, say it creatively
    Years in the making, blood, sweat, tears and patience
    Its more than a moment, you値l feel this creation
    I spun that shit backwards, It's love that I知 after
    But once that is captured, I知 done with this chapter
    Its all pyschological, mind is an obstacle
    No moment of silence, I find to be possible
    On the quietest of days, it felt like a race
    No sleep for the mind, I壇 lie there awake
    I never stopped writing, the come up was crucial
    I wanted approval, but what would that do though
    Few minutes of fame, you all knew my name
    But now that its over, a few that remain
    Its all just a cycle, I知 back stuck in idle
    I wanted the title, but never this tidal
    Cause this tidal wave, got my mind astray
    But I spun that shit backwards, finding my way
    On October sky, I知 waving good bye
    But til that day comes, I say look alive

    Hook x2
    Okay
    You know me,
    But that dont mean that we homies
    Okay
    You sorry,
    But where the fuck was you always
    Okay
    Its on,
    But I知 too far gone
    No way,
    Just faded
    In all the best ways, ya

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    Re: NEW SONG - OKAY! (PlayWryte)

    I like your style and the topic - the chorus the most
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    Why does everyone think I知 a boy?

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    Re: NEW SONG - OKAY! (PlayWryte)

    Appreciate it!

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