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    Coal to the furnace Cody Phoenix's Avatar
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    I have a dream that my mind would arrange,
    then my life-will then stray from stifling chains,
    but all I recite is my ways, and inside it's not sane,
    it's as silent as taste cos I feel that I'm dying today,
    but today is the day to say that "my life will all change!"
    & in my head i'm puttin' fire in rain; quietly strained,
    the 'tyrant's away; in the cockpit now & I'm flying away!
    taking a flight racing at night, just pacing the sights,
    & I'm going the world over just to say it's all-right.
    yeah it's alright.. but that doesn't make it alright,
    I can't even make up my mind taking my time!
    but places I ride to are never comparing to my room,
    all I miss is my mother, fuck it, I'll say it-- I love her.
    but if I don't make a change, she'll make arrangements,
    and that's a pain if I never truly get to say it!
    this is a revelation, head high w/ no medication,
    no dead eyes, just relaxing letting better days in.
    It's alright. I'm better changing.





    


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    Re: Head High

    Love it and the style you wrote too I feed off you. Your grammar and how you lay out your lines to show the flow I need to study more. But you already know your talented and I do apprecaite all your feedback and help.
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    Re: Head High

    Are you recording this or is it something you can spit out loud? I'd like to hear how you caught it, because I caught a flow on it my first read through. I might have messed up reading words, but only a few. And the flow I had was hitting it dope. I'd be interested to hear how you spit it.

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    Re: Head High

    Quote Originally Posted by Nahlidge View Post
    Are you recording this or is it something you can spit out loud? I'd like to hear how you caught it, because I caught a flow on it my first read through. I might have messed up reading words, but only a few. And the flow I had was hitting it dope. I'd be interested to hear how you spit it.
    I'll hit up the recording studio my friend has and record it sometime, I did a finished version to this 12-16 more lines in it, turned out fresh. Thanks, Nahlidge.

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    As far as how I wrote it/spit it? Just went with the beat, a little faster than the metronome on a serious delivery w/ emotional emphasis on the rhymes

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    Quote Originally Posted by A Disciple View Post
    Love it and the style you wrote too I feed off you. Your grammar and how you lay out your lines to show the flow I need to study more. But you already know your talented and I do apprecaite all your feedback and help.
    danke <3
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